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Ghostly Farewell
Contributed by
aliopterix
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Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 11:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ghostly Farewell
Looking round the sea of faces
He’s focussed on the poignant spaces
Of fallen comrades already passed.
One he knows, the tears are falling
She cannot hear his desperate calling
To stem the tide it hurts so much.
He cannot bear to see her pain
And tries to call her yet again
But in vain and so prepares to leave.
The light above is warm, magnetic
And there more faces, passed, eclectic.
One last look at those assembled.
Passing a ghostly hand through that lovely face
He blows a kiss and moves apace
To join his fallen comrades in the sky.
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aliopterix
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2011-10-18 23:49:25]
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Re: Ghostly Farewell
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by navydocny on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 12:46:17 AM AEST
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Nicely Done!
Thank You for sharing....
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Re: Ghostly Farewell
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by crisscross12 on
Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 10:46:29 PM AEST
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I found this very intriguing, and the words created great mental imagery. Pretty amazing! thanks!
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