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Contributed by
Laeth
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Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 10:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Smile, Smile and fake
Your emotions. Through
Your fake emotions
I see a white calm steed.
Please
Affluence with ease
Please
Aristocracy, Beau Monde.
Please
In the Final corner, Black
Bright blue, effulgence
Benevolence in society
Solitude. Behind the
Final corner, placid
Haute Monde
Copyright ©
Laeth
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2011-10-17 22:29:37]
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Re: Please
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 06:55:02 AM AEST
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| some words are beyond my vocab explain ? |
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Re: Please
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by Laeth on
Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 09:54:08 PM AEST
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Beau monde - the fashionable world; high society.
Haute monde - high society.
Aristocracy - a class of persons holding exceptional rank and privileges, especially the hereditary nobility.
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Re: Please
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by Laeth on
Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 09:55:09 PM AEST
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any critics? any opinions, comments?
please let me know
thanks alot |
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Re: Please
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 06:58:48 PM AEST
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| it's a very true poem. you wrote it perfectly - especially with those words. i liked it. it's different. |
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Re: Please
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by cathartic on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 09:11:29 PM AEST
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| its original. for that i will give you 2 on a scale of 1-5. just because it original, does not mean it passes as an exceptional piece of work. A for effort (: |
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Re: Please
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by Laeth on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 11:58:26 PM AEST
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was that 2 out of 5 as 5 being the worst a 1 being the best?
i need more comments and opinions please, |
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