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Away
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 12:06:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm not saying much, but what I will say,
Is yet once again, we are on our way,
Ten thousand miles we will travel, within a day
And once again without any money, but hey....
If you don't take the risk, and see come what may
At home you will stay, you will never stray
So many months will see us way, way away
Until we have worked, scrimped and saved
And got up enough to fly back over the waves
To return home for even a few days
But home is where your heart is they say
So my home is anywhere together we stay.
As a footnote, I will be away a lil while but checking each day in here to make sure things are running as bumpy as they always are :)
Take care all, see you soon, and see some soonerah than others :) (as he smiles across the miles and he jumps a plane for whoknowswhere)
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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Re: Away
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 06:13:20 AM AEST
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Wow, can't believe I'm the first to comment.
good work friend.
Ya'll enjoy your selves in the midst of it all.
Luv ya'll,
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Re: Away
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 10:01:44 AM AEST
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'Away' is a smooth and well-written poem, but I must confess a certain fear that when 'father' is gone, the kids will misbehave :) Well, thank you for all your kind words and your tireless and excellent work. How fitting to say Goodbye in a poem! Of course I know you have to go AWAY -- and wish you both well -- that is, as long as you promise to come back! Nah -- even if you stay AWAY, stay in peace. Shalom for now--
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Re: Away
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by ming on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 10:00:39 AM AEST
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Oddly mad or maddly odd, you always capture me with the story of a good read. Nice!
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Re: Away
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 08:18:39 AM AEST
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| when love is real ,money as no appeal .The risk is better because you are being real with your feeling. In this poem.enjoy you vacation. |
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Re: Away
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 08:24:15 AM AEST
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| when love is real ,money as no appeal .The risk is better because you are being real with your feeling. In this poem.enjoy you vacation. |
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