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2012 everafter

Contributed by alicewhite on Saturday, 15th October 2011 @ 08:32:53 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

EYE cried
tongue tied
deadly,sin
name pride

choke,smoke
mirror pope,
image, mirror
path, approach,

glutony, greed,
envy and sloath
body ,christ, flesh, loaf ,
feed, head, wisdom, growth.

je -stir, trick- stir,
fools gold hoax,
blood, wine , holy grail ,
wolf, sheep, goat .

missread scripture
tell a- path- y,
say or said,
tweedle dumb,
tweedle dee,
red queen slayeth,
off with dead head.,

apples and pairs ,
wooden hill, counting stairs
Astarte a wish,
off to bed
say your prayers
but keep one eye open,
be watchful,
beware,
the wolf in sheeps clothing,
watches you,
from his lair,

now sleep deep
and sweet dreams
and away with your cares.

You'll wake up awakening,
when theres no more despair,
and love light and caring ,
is all we need
share.

TICK TOCK, TICK TOCK
2012
almost there.

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2011-10-15 20:32:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: 2012 everafter (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Tuesday, 25th October 2011 @ 08:35:22 AM AEST
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The subliminal message in this is oozing! I love the satiric undertone throughout. It is in a way mocking religious scriptures in general, in this case the Bible, about how jumbled all these 'so called' religious teachings that which the popes and cardinals and priests use to maintain their religious authority to pass any law or decree and make the masses believe anything they want them to believe in the name of salvation and heaven. Its almost like a gigantic octopus with its eight tentacles covering the earth. well written.

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