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You And Me
Contributed by
exquisitesincerity
on
Saturday, 15th October 2011 @ 06:46:07 AM in AEST
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Last night, I had a dream of me and you,
both of us together, a loving so true.
Your voice was the sweetest thing to hear,
My favorite part is keeping you near.
No tears,
No fighting,
Absolutely no fears.
Just you and me walking the streets of Amsterdam,
The moment my waking arrived and then bam.
The vision of you and I, you and me,
It was a love only I could see.
I wish for you, I wouldn't feel this thing,
And the disappointment feels like a constant wasp sting.
When you notice me, this smile isn't fake,
And my heart is yours to take. But, baby, please don't break.
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2011-10-15 06:46:07]
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Re: You And Me
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by sanders on
Saturday, 15th October 2011 @ 07:17:56 AM AEST
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| nice poem...heart-felt feelings coming out in words |
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Re: You And Me
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by withoutaheart on
Saturday, 15th October 2011 @ 08:40:49 AM AEST
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| it would be so much harder if the guy actually fell for you to, because then the break up would be unbearable. You got spared, you're lucky. |
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Re: You And Me
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 15th October 2011 @ 01:00:45 PM AEST
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| I could feel the emotions in this flow |
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Re: You And Me
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by potentialpoet96 on
Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 05:46:45 PM AEST
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| i liked that a lot. it seems as though we have been in a relativly same predicament. you should check out some of my poems, maybe they will give you inspriation for another. |
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