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si vis pacem para bellum
Contributed by
cathartic
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Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 08:58:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I heard freedoms song
she sounded like silence
I peeked through her melody
she bled red letters that stained my heart
forming between each line the word violence
optical delusion of consciousness
and now the chorus begins
sending off a burning sensation between my jived bones
her song colored my soul blue
she sings:
peace, is what I’m dying for
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2011-10-14 20:58:03]
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Re: si vis pacem para bellum
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 10:51:54 PM AEST
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| I like it. |
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Re: si vis pacem para bellum
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by elle on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 05:48:04 AM AEST
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Hi :) I love this poem. The last line could almost be my motto. . .
Peace is what I'm dying for. . .
Thanks for your comment as well. elle :) |
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Re: si vis pacem para bellum
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 12:19:52 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. A treasure beyond words.
blessings
emy
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Re: si vis pacem para bellum
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th April 2014 @ 08:39:27 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, love how you laid it out,
hugs n' love nessa |
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