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A sonnet of Coates
Contributed by
MattHolcombe
on
Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 01:54:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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As the lightness sinks her eyes,
She sings to me softly,
I tighten all my ties,
Her heart i know is costly.
We strengthen our bonds,
By words we cannot speak,
But i know i may be conned,
By the beautiful and meek.
I play with mind a soul,
And i am not forgiving,
The sweet is always told,
We are merely living.
As the clock strikes the noon,
We lay our lives on sacred rune.
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MattHolcombe
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2011-10-14 13:54:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A sonnet of Coates
(User Rating: 1 ) by Waqasrab on
Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 04:25:45 PM AEST (User
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Love the Lyricism and how you manage the iambic parameter, very vivid, great job keep it up, do have a look on the mid part and close to the end though.. just another proof might help you tinker it into perfection.
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