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Garden of Tulips
Contributed by
xanvier
on
Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 12:15:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As i walk through the garden
i can feel the breeze of warm air
Like i'm in heaven above
asking God about true love
with their tall tree
how stand it can be
everytime i look at them
i could see you in my mind
imagining that you are here
with me holding my hand
everytime i touch them
i can feel you inside
dominating my body and soul
everytime i smell them
the scent of your skin
the aroma of your hair
is like, the touch of heaven
downing through my spine
everytime i hear the bird chirps
circling around the garden
is such a gentle sound of music
As the Garden of Tulips fades away
the love in the atmosphere
will blow it by the wind
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xanvier
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2011-10-14 12:15:07]
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Re: Garden of Tulips
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by Waqasrab on
Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 04:45:12 PM AEST
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read John Keats He'll Totally inspire you..
if you could focus on the Lyrical Aspect of your poetry more you readers would have a superior experience , it was enjoyable reading your work, but i would love it more if you took the effort to make it rhyme.. though i have to say concept was strong.. liked the flow of images it inspired in my mind
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Re: Garden of Tulips
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th November 2014 @ 06:49:21 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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