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endings
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 07:53:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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soft
misty
places
full of
sharp
edges
stillness
deerlike
empty-eyed
look
you can't
tell
the
sun
about
the
sky
just
go
away
let me
dream.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-10-13 07:53:29]
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Re: endings
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by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 08:05:49 AM AEST
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| Reading 'endings' was a beginning for me. Started my day with delight. another masterpiece -- so far of all the ones I've read of yours -- I think this is my favorite. It's so -- well -- poetic! --Flinthunter |
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Re: endings
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 08:21:23 AM AEST
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Great writing, friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: endings
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by elle on
Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 04:12:46 PM AEST
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I think it's simply lovely dear ming. . .
elle :) |
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