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Alone
Contributed by
kennieloveit
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Wednesday, 12th October 2011 @ 07:45:51 PM in AEST
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Im alone;
Alone in this fight
In this fight with myself im alone.
My mind can't rest from all this crippled anger.
All my heart needs is a reason to beat.
Will i ever find that reason?
No. Never.
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kennieloveit
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2011-10-12 19:45:51]
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Re: Alone
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th October 2011 @ 08:18:51 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Sad but awesome writing.
Blessings,
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Re: Alone
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by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 01:47:42 AM AEST
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Dear respected by kennieloveit,
Your poem is indeed very small
You can even elaborately pen
As that will give you great relief
Still you have conveyed the news
Never stay alone, join a group
Or just silently participate dear
Or hear songs, watch the TV
Or go to Church or a movie
Engage yourself strictly
Doing something finely
Never give time to worry
You will see the paradise
Love the whole humanity
Lead life with fullest joy
Take pleasure in small acts
Enjoy every action minutely
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: Alone
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 07:39:03 PM AEST
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I once wanted a reason, I looked for a meaning in life. While looking for that I found that we have to make our reasons everyone has something they want to accomplish. Weither it be simple or complex we have reasons to make our hearts beat. Mine being my mother, who wants to watch me finish college. I feel I owe her that much. You have a reason to make your heart beat, finding it is the hard part but after that...It seems the world is a better place.
Great read..made me think of me when I was a little younger.
Hope to read more soon
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 02:18:16 AM AEST
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| this is really good. you said it all in what you wrote. i feel you. i'm depressed alot. i was trying to come up wit a poem about depression - and i couldn't think of any. perfectly done. |
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