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mangled dedication

Contributed by drapes on Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 05:32:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

What if you stepped out of your bedroom
And saw a masterpiece
Of love, blood and agony
Spewed across the staircase?
Each piece of
Smooth, slick pearl and corresponding cushion
Have never craved your touch as now.
Fragile fingertips await our first brush,
But lips are slashed and twisted
From saying too much.
Paintings on the wrists were inspired by you.
Lower limbs are scattered, chopped - imperfection wouldn't do.
The delicately chiseled hips would scrape yours perfectly,
Too bad the artwork shattered
Into bloody heaps of black debris.
The brain peaks out,
Juices drowning the electric source,
The intricate pattern similar to yours.
Ribs like claws encasing me,
Digging in your carpet,
My secrets flowing free.
Assemble me this time, I can't fall more apart.
You must insert the missing piece
If you and he can part.
It may be drained, bruised, incomplete
But how can I begin to start
(to breathe, walk, heal, BE)
without
...my
...heart?

5.14.11

Copyright © drapes ... [ 2011-10-11 17:32:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: mangled dedication (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Wednesday, 12th October 2011 @ 09:35:00 PM AEST
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Very bold writing that grips you and reels curiosity in to see what is in store next...so much emotion and there is a dedication here that is pure...fantastic job

duff

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