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TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 11:12:18 PM in AEST
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You've Always been there for me.
You never fussed at my wrongs.
You continued to live Mom's morals.
You hang in there every day
Remembering, Mom"s songs.
We were walking down the hospital
Steps after Mom passed, My brother said
"Now daddy you are all we have left."
Daddy Said, "Well son, I'll do my best."
You embraced Mom's luv,
She left us all when she passed.
She wept only before her death.
We all knew heaven she embraced.
Her luv memory's
Helped us survive, I guess.
Year's later you told us good bye
After fighting cancer the last time.
Al-tho I embraced you didn't
Want you to leave
But I know you and Mom are fine.
To the greatest Dad and Mom that walked this Planet.
I luved you then, I luv u now.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2011-10-10 23:12:18]
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by aliopterix on
Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 12:10:48 AM AEST
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I miss my parents too and my sister. Very poignant, thank you for sharing. It has inspired me to write,
Al |
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by FlintHunter on
Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 04:41:05 AM AEST
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| 'TRIBUTE TO MY DAD' is a beautiful poem. It's sad but not too sad -- and it ends on a positive note. I think that's great. I miss my parents too -- but there's nothing we can do to bring them back. Your poem brings them back in the best way we can -- with beautiful sentiments and heart-felt words. -- FlintHunter |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 10:42:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful tribute my sister! I can feel
the tears as they stream down your face
(and mine). I am an orphan now too, for
many years now. But thanks be to God,
I know you have that same "Blessed Hope"
that I have as we anxiously await our
"Reunion in the sky" when our Lord and Savior
"Wipes away all the tears from our eyes" forever!
Blessings, Your friend,
Rob |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 03:29:24 PM AEST
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| your writings are always so inspirational thought provoking.Love this flow...... |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by duff on
Wednesday, 12th October 2011 @ 09:44:44 PM AEST
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Your writing boasts of a warmth that is contagious...so much soul and emotion emy...great job my friend!
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 05:42:08 PM AEST
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:( ((((emystar))))) ty
btw u spelled it right
but even if u didn't it's
ok, i wouldn't tell the
mods.
Ben :) |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 03:19:49 PM AEST
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Inspiring, motivating and moving as so often your work is.
Somehow you always manage to extol the positives in situations that never seem as if they can be.
Once again I am soothed and uplifted by your work.
Steve |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 29th October 2011 @ 03:57:45 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful tribute you've paid to your Mom and Dad. Finer words have never been written. |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by AaroKeith on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 08:23:45 PM AEST
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| The topic is so sad, you write very well. |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 09:06:44 AM AEST
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| this is a beautiful poem. you did an excellent job of expressing your feelings, and making people see how your parents were truly parents. i'm sorry you lost them. i don't call my so-called parents ' parents. ' i don't know exactly how you feel - but you have a way with words. i felt them through your writing. |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 08:43:21 AM AEST
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I'm always late with a response
what can I say
that hasn't been said....
well done. |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by Shanz33 on
Monday, 14th November 2011 @ 12:13:23 AM AEST
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Thank you for sharing that beautifully written poem. It brought tears to my eye. My dad died because of cancer. it brings comfort knowing he no longer suffers. Well done Emy!
Shanaaz |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by dvtpdw on
Sunday, 20th November 2011 @ 07:43:14 AM AEST
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| This poem created the vision in my mind of a family who loved one another, and kept each other in their lives. Great write, and it gave me hope. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 20th November 2011 @ 08:27:31 PM AEST
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A nice tribute to them both. I miss my mom dearly & I cherish having my dad around me.
Great write! |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by rick2 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 06:30:21 PM AEST
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| Simply lovely!! |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 12:45:59 PM AEST
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Powerful inspiration of an old soul wisdom expressed here. Can't say who the old soul was ...
he or ... thee. Heartfelt lyric. Beautiful to me.
wabl
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by lyricalpoet on
Tuesday, 6th December 2011 @ 05:22:34 AM AEST
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| i love your rhyme scheme |
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Re: TRIBUTE TO MY DAD.
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by JamesB on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 09:05:07 AM AEST
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| So beautiful! This poem really inspires me. |
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