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I do!
Contributed by
SophiDrown
on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 04:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Every wish for death to come,
To take away the pain?
That you feel every day
Wishing it to go away.
The hole in your heart
grows with every word they say
Always there to evade on the sunny days
Always in harms way
Laying in the dark to decay
Nothing left but the pain.
Ever wish for death to come
and take you way
From the pain in the
words that
that they
say......
I do
Every day.
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SophiDrown
... [
2011-10-10 16:09:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I do!
(User Rating: 1 ) by xanvier on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 05:41:26 PM AEST (User
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everyday of our lives we cannot avoid the pain that we are going through, just think of tomorrow that it will bring a bright new day of joyous and happiness in our lives, don't lose hope for as to saying goes "Live your Life to the Fullest" as for our lives are too short, Death is not the only option to ease the pain... nice and beautiful poetry |
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Re: I do!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 08:41:46 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very sad but well done.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: I do!
(User Rating: 1 ) by sfiawong on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 09:02:29 PM AEST (User
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Yes, there is no can escape illness, pain, and face death, nothing like you say Always in harms way
Laying in the dark to decay
Nothing left but the pain."
also with loneliness in the day and night, just wait for death, before leaving away. Very good in the whole.I feel you're sad.Your arrangement for the last few lines shortening to the last seems the life is ended.
Well done my friend!
sfiawong
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