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silver silence
Contributed by
ravenoktober
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Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 05:09:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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they say we're madmen, we're insane
we refuse to continue their charade,
refuse to pretend there's no pain
refuse to join the plastic parade
so easy to say
that'll never be me
beneath the walls falling away
poster children for wrecked society
i've watched people breaking
never knowing their pain; raw, aching
a feeling i now know too well
how could they succumb to poison?
i couldn't believe the fools
driven away from reason
victims of society's rules
from birth to the moment they're dead
their burden not on their back,
but in veins gray with lead
so cold it burns as their sight goes black
some people smile as they die
others refuse to play; they escape
i won't live a lie
blindfolded, screaming through duct tape
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ravenoktober
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2011-10-10 05:09:13]
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Re: silver silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 11:24:54 AM AEST
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'silver silence' is a dynamic poem. It speaks both clearly and meaningfully. It is -- to me -- about the phoniness of most society -- I hope I'm right: like about the masks persons wear for no real reason other than they think they must. if that's what the poem's about -- yippee! But if I missed the point entirely -- well that's regular fare for me... Regardless, this is one cool poem and I dig it. --FF
Contributed by ravenoktober on Monday, October 10 2011 @ 05:09:13 AEST
Topic: Dark Poetry
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Re: silver silence
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by toxicchubakka on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 02:48:21 PM AEST
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| i like it |
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Re: silver silence
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by xanvier on
Wednesday, 12th October 2011 @ 07:20:52 AM AEST
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| from our society that is coming today, the only thing can ease their pain is to do illegal drugs, drugs that will that makes them insane and do things that's not suppose to be, syrynge, cocaine, marijuana there's lots more... nice and beautiful poetry... |
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