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Contributed by
Sparky19832
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Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 06:24:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When I try to take a break
and relax in my busy life
my heart it does ache
and all I think is how I miss my wife
It hurts me so bad
all this pain inside
thinking of the love we had
and the tears I have cried
I think of the places that we went to
how I love you with all my heart
and all the things we didn’t get to do
but most of all how we have been torn apart
I miss you so
and love you still
I did not want to let you go
but I tell myself it was Gods will
Every day I see things you done
it is lonely without you here
I try to be strong for our wonderful son
but all I can do is drink another beer
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Sparky19832
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2011-10-09 18:24:40]
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Re: want feedback
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 07:49:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
this write is very sad but it's great writing. I think u have discovered a hidden talent here. Keep writing.
I was just wondering if she passed a way or What?
Either way I.m so sorry for your loose.
Blessings,
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Re: want feedback
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by Sparky19832 on
Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 08:09:22 PM AEST
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| Thank you, and yes she did pass away in April 2011 |
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Re: want feedback
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by vampyrekiss on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 12:08:39 AM AEST
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| very honest I can hear your pain and where your coming from. good write |
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Re: want feedback
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 03:46:17 PM AEST
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| The pain can be felt in this flow..... |
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