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My Beloved
Contributed by
aliopterix
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Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 02:07:42 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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My Beloved
Beloved with your eyes of green
The like of which I’ve never seen
Your countenance does make me weep
And keep me from a healthy sleep
You’ll never hear complaint from me
As I am lost beneath your spell
I beg you darling take me whole
My heart my mind my very soul
For I wouldst pledge myself to thee
The one whose love you have set free
I am yours for all eternity
Don’t ever leave me please I beg
When we are old prepared to die
Then side by side we’ll surely lie
For without you I could never live
And so to God my life would give
To enter peace with you my dear
Our spirits joined just like our love
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aliopterix
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2011-10-09 14:07:42]
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Re: My Beloved
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 03:18:08 PM AEST
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One word, although a cliche, comes to my mind: awww! The sentimentality of true love is beautiful. Your poem portrays every aspect of such love eloquently,
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Re: My Beloved
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 10:25:22 PM AEST
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Nicely done with sentimentality and every line bearing a rhyming scheme. The more you write, the harder that will be to accomplish. Let it come
from the heart always, and rhymes will take a back seat to truthful feelings. Good work!
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