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unable to vanish
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 08:03:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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knitted trees
isolate a buzzard
devouring
loneliness
Her miracle's
an intimate
dance of wild
meant to teach
your heart
ticking the
valley clock
and every time
I meet Her...
ego into thin air.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-10-08 20:03:48]
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Re: unable to vanish
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by sfiawong on
Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 09:24:05 PM AEST
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ming,
Although it is a short poem, it tells a good form of writing, like a short form of chinese poetry, but this kind of writing is not popular in the English poetry. I understand your thought entirely. There is no problem for me, because I am a Chinese who can accept this.'Loneliness, miracle, teach, heart, clock time and air seemed not quite connected, because there are lack of verbs to help catching the whole meanings.
Thank you for sharing!
Your single name 'ming' is that calling:(明)
I am 'albert wong.' 亞拔王.
My internet name: 'sfiawong' and 'alwong'
nice to meet you right here in YPc!. |
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Re: unable to vanish
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 13th October 2011 @ 03:12:58 PM AEST
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It's who you're looking to for purpose not what,
that determines your outlook on life. In speaking about happiness and self fulfillment and all needs being met, The Bible says, "Seek ye first the Kingdom of God and His Righteousness, and all these things will be added to you." So the bottom line is this: Happiness is your choice and yours alone! Choose it! What's holding you back? Reflect on it. Your eyes might just be opened by a fresh new life and outlook.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns
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Re: unable to vanish
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 14th October 2011 @ 07:05:32 AM AEST
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'unable to vanish' is an exquisite poem that once again shows your special style of writing. I am prepared, always, for your short phrases -- usually in couplets; but i am never prepared for the trail-blazing trail upon which you lead me -- To. Will you ever write a bad poem -- or what?
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Re: unable to vanish
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Saturday, 15th October 2011 @ 08:53:00 AM AEST
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Oh my Gosh. I owe you a big apology! After re-reading this poem, I realize I made a terrible
mistake. I must explain what happened. I am
nearly blind. I must use powerful magnifying lenses to read and write. When I make comments, I must first write them out on another document first so I can see what I'm doing by enlarging the font to a huge size. I then have to paste and copy that message back into this box. I had several replies ready to several poems on one desktop page and I posted the wrong reply to this poem here. I am so very embarrassed and sorry.
Blessings,
Rob
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Re: unable to vanish
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd October 2015 @ 12:44:30 PM AEST
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| I've been in this poem, and I shall go again tomorrow morning. Spirituality, to me, is the connection with 'Mother Nature'. Knitted trees isolate a buzzard.' You got me from the start. I'm always alone in the valley, but never lonely, and a buzzard will greet me for sure. It's no place for ego, it disperses with her power to entrance. You got right into me here, ming, whether my interpretation is as you intended, matters not. Thank you, a memorable poem. |
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