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Cast The First Stone
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 01:00:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Your trivialities float into my hemisphere
Clouds that block lucidity of thought
I do not wish to feast upon inconsequential
Its relevance as sunset to a man without sight
Drip, drip your words like water unstemmed from a tap
Pouring out gossip, a torrent of rumour and supposition
Judge unofficial, more prone to condemnation
Biased to the critical, negative consumed
Poised at the window to everyone else's world
Uninvited watchman, sentinel to wild unfounded allegation
If words take on a colour, yours are always black
Those evil spores escape your lips and fester into lies
Remarks that you wield like sharpened knives
Draw blood from the innocent, stab the unarmed
If you are truly pure, untainted by misdemeanour
Then I will allow you to cast the first stone.
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2011-10-08 13:00:34]
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Re: Cast The First Stone
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 06:57:08 PM AEST
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100% pure truth.
huggs, smile, blessings,
emy
gREAT JOB. dang my computor has it's own mind. |
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Re: Cast The First Stone
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 03:09:00 AM AEST
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| a true and intellegently written view, great write! |
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Re: Cast The First Stone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2011 @ 09:34:04 AM AEST
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| perfectly done! you said everything with all truth. i was thinking of writing a poem about gossipers - you did it much better than i would've. you have a way with words. you have talent. |
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Re: Cast The First Stone
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 9th March 2015 @ 12:14:34 PM AEST
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ahhh
excellent excellent excellent,
"draw blood from the innocent"
This flow is a masterpeice..... |
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