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The Gift
Contributed by
spoiledbrat
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Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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This is a very Special Gift
That you can Never see
The reason its so Special because it comes to you from me
Whenever you are lonely,
Or even feeling blue,
You only have to hold this Gift
And know I think of you
You never Can unwrap it
Please Leave the ribbon ties
Just hold the box up to your heart
Its filled with my love inside
Copyright ©
spoiledbrat
... [
2003-04-30 13:05:00]
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Re: The Gift
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:26:24 PM AEST
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good sentiment
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Re: The Gift
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 04:57:30 PM AEST
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| not to be mean but this is pretty stupid i mean your putting to much filling in to it you no when somone reads this there going to think your talking to that person so hey it was pretty good though i'll have to give you some props |
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Re: The Gift
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:26:49 AM AEST
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| I like this, it shows it's the thought that counts, and that's so true. I loved it amanda! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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