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On the banks of tommorow
Contributed by
2gonad
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Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 05:09:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Ponder this future by the waterside,
Life flows by and we haven''t tried.
I''m sure this wasn''t youths vision,
Predictable pigeon holed living.
Bullied within inches of suicide,
From your past you try to hide.
Classroom taunts for your newborn daughter,
Old friends now lay dead in that water.
But our dreams have fallen on our own deaf ears,
Meandering through our adult years.
Home alone with unwanted child,
You didn''t see that young and wild.
Changing the world with immature dreams,
More questions than answer it always seems.
So whets in this for your beloved daughters,
Find your answers beneath dirty waters
Copyright ©
2gonad
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2011-10-07 17:09:06]
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Re: On the banks of tommorow
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 12:11:55 AM AEST
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Oh tears to my eye, as i look back and realise
What u say is true
I have lost me the other you..
Part of a poem i rite matches yours so well.
Called. Oh Tears To My Eyes
Greatings
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Re: On the banks of tommorow
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 01:05:14 PM AEST
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Like the water in the poem, it flowed so well from start to end.
I could really identify with what you were saying in this, it had a beautiful quality to it.
Well done.
Steve |
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