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will she
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 09:49:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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new
the old story
stories keep
sleep-depra
tiptoes wobble
4am pace on
and off forgot
she's binged
sliding back
to dream I'm
a mother I'm
myself I'm 3
and four
and alone
with ghosts
and whim
spangled
grabbing me
and me and
no one else
but poems
papers pens
peace off
from the path
and dark meddlings
but
never
silent.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-10-07 09:49:16]
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Re: will she
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 01:35:22 PM AEST
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Not only 'will she,' but 'she will;' and furthermore, 'she has' and 'she does.' This one blew me away. Like a strange wind... Ever thankful that:
but poems
papers pens
peace off
from the path
and dark meddlings
but
never
silent...
................................... Ah... Thus... I am
Sincerely yours,
FlintHunter
Contributed by ming on Friday, October 07 2011 @ 09:49:16 AEST
Topic: Abstract Poetry
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Re: will she
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by duff on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 08:49:26 PM AEST
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What a captivating and mysterious piece...it's dark but has that interesting feel of whats on the other side of the door...your writing is full of possibility...awesome
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