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Demise
Contributed by
RavenOktober
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Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 06:55:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The closest of twins
Grown apart just as completely
Bitten by others sins
They whispered, like we couldn’t see
Like we couldn’t hear
The lies they spoke
With each rumor, the end drew near
Under attack, a part of us broke
The tiny gap
To push us apart
On the map
Of the end, the start
So close, we knew each other’s every thought
We finished what the other started
But lost the war we’d so long fought,
And I was left, broken-hearted
I can hardly stand the way I’ve changed
I believe that you have too
If we met again, best friends estranged
How would I look to you?
The animal pack dragged us under
Always a hit, never a miss
And so I have to wonder,
How would you finish this?
Copyright ©
RavenOktober
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2011-10-06 06:55:29]
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Re: Demise
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 10:33:45 AM AEST
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Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Demise
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by aliopterix on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 11:03:37 PM AEST
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Liked this very much, thank you
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Re: Demise
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 12:51:48 AM AEST
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| It is never too late to rekindle friendship! Wonderful poem! |
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Re: Demise
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by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 06:32:40 AM AEST
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| yes my friend it is so sad when love drifts and 2 peoples hearts get lost |
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