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My Hell

Contributed by RavenOktober on Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 05:20:17 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Kill me, you know you want to
You know you’d love to watch me die
You aren’t happy til I suffer
So go ahead and make your day

The feel of the flames,
A rain of ashes
This must be your heaven
I know it’s my hell

You think you’ve trapped me
You think I’m broken
I am not lost yet
In this living nightmare

The feel of the flames
A rain of ashes
This must be your heaven
I know it’s my hell

You can never win,
I’ll never surrender
This too will end
I will be the victor

I am the flame
I leave you the ashes
This isn’t my heaven
But I’ll make it your hell

Copyright Â© RavenOktober ... [ 2011-10-06 05:20:17]
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Re: My Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 10:27:39 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I luv your write. I can relate.
Know eacxtly how that feels. Needless to say I got out too.
I waited 8 years before I even considered a new relationship.
Blessings, huggs,
emy

Re: My Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 12:55:05 AM AEST
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Sadly a relationship like that only feeds the flame of despair, and keeps a person unhappy. You should try to get out if you feel that way constantly.

Re: My Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by KHANVICT on Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 01:58:40 PM AEST
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Very very sad, if this is fact. Even if not, this can be related to many around the world who are living in hell on earth made by their supposed loved ones. KEEP IT UP

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