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Deer Dreamer
Contributed by
Balto
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Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 04:11:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Wandering through the forest in his winter wonderland,
Was a deer whose thoughts were of romantic brand.
I didn't help that some called him sensitive and queer,
Life did not come easy for a love-believing deer.
He pondered and waited for a light to brighten up his miserable being,
But there was no such thing as love - but he never stopped believing.
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Balto
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2011-10-06 04:11:58]
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Re: Deer Dreamer
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 11:43:41 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Deer Dreamer
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by honest-eyes on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 05:01:46 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem, though short, it tells a story. Good Job. feel free to to check out my poem 'Beloved'. |
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Re: Deer Dreamer
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 12:38:35 AM AEST
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Those who actually seek long lasting love are unfortunately not the norm, and often thought of as strange. Short and sweet is what most people want nowadays I think. It's a shame really.
I loved your poem. It made me think. :) |
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