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-Vortex of Sin-

Contributed by gem48 on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Why should I change myself?
Get a grip.
Change myself for this or that person
Never going to happen
Get real
When will you accept me for who I am.
For who I could be?
Im never going to be free.
How can I if you wont see me for who I am.
You say change this
Take off that
Why should I change my appearance or life for anyone,
I don’t care who you are.
This is me.
Get use to it
Heaven only knows you’ve had long enough.
One day
I’ll open up to you
I’ll show you the real me
Maybe then you’ll appreciate the beauty inside
It’ll probably never happen
You’re already to late.
All that was good has been replaced.
Gone are the days of happiness and joy
Light replaced by dark
A twisted world that engulfs me,
A vortex of sin.

Copyright Â© gem48 ... [ 2003-04-30 10:35:00]
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Re: -Vortex of Sin- (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 06:43:31 PM AEST
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this is a really strong write - if only more people weren't afraid to be themselves. i like the phrase 'vortex of sin' too - it creates a very visual image. great poem, keep them coming. KT x

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