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Love is a Rose....
Contributed by
RussellReinhardt
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Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 03:29:34 AM in AEST
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Love is a Rose....
Love is a rose.
Soft and gentle.
Sweet and seductive.
Caring and kind.
Binding and blinding.
Captivates the heart and soul of a man.
Never to give it back again....
RR
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Re: Love is a Rose....
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 03:34:10 AM AEST
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savoring beauty
sets you free
and that is how,
life's meant to be.
lol I also love white roses. I have always thought a rose is the perfect flower to symbolize love.
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Re: Love is a Rose....
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by alwong on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 09:29:50 AM AEST
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Hi, RR,
A short poem needs some rhymes otherwise it does not attract readers. Some year ago, I also read a poem written by Brenda in the same title.
Reads like this:
I sense his mood
by his breathless,
wanting,
captivating stare
he opens me like
a hibernating rose
from the depths of the earth
in he cold hard winter months..........
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(Is this good?)Your piece needs arrange with rhymes, vows ..why there a sentence ended 'of a man'? i don't like this ending. |
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Re: Love is a Rose....
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 11:50:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful like the rose.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Love is a Rose....
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by Martin89 on
Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 01:17:09 PM AEST
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| short and nice and as much as i like poems that rhyme i prefer a poem like this jus gets to the point of it all and expresses exactly what ut you feel. |
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