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A dream in the eyes of the beholder

Contributed by RyanAHall on Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 12:50:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The cutest girl that caught my eye, i don't know who she is and i don't know why. I happened to be stunned by her looks, she's stealing my heart like any other crook. I haven't even spoke to this girl, but the way she is so eloquent makes my stomach twirl. Just knowing that she's so damn beautiful, she's gonna end up making me look like a fool. Stumbling on words thinking what to say to her, i asked her for her name but the rest was just a blur. It went in one ear and out the other, ignored so bad i had to hide for cover. The second try was at the county fair, i asked her to the rides but she didn't even care. Gave me the cold shoulder and i froze up in my tracks, my friends told me to give up and face the facts. I try and try again but no luck, just knowing im without her has hurt me and really sucks. I know that i am stronger that this, but the way she's so hypnotizing i just want a kiss. The last time i saw her was at a concert, her hair in a bun wearing a paramore shirt. The place was crowded but i noticed that pretty face anywhere, usually gorgeous enough to make me stop and stare. I walked up to her then she stopped me by suprise, asking me why give the effort why even try. To look at you and believe in love at first sight, i think of you when i wake up and the last thing when its night. Blushing so bad that her face turned bright red, saying wow thats the nicest thing about me a guy has ever said. The mystery girl left without a number or a name, but i guess since i let out my feelings i just feel the same. That girl was unbelievable from head to toe, i was normal at most times but around her i felt slow. Breathtaking girl i wish i got to know, the world would stop still and your personality would glow, maybe if i got to know you my feelings could have grown, but the empty space you left my heart has to be sewn.

Copyright © RyanAHall ... [ 2011-10-06 00:50:35]
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Re: A dream in the eyes of the beholder (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Thursday, 6th October 2011 @ 01:42:14 AM AEST
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My dear friend. That is a most beautifl display of love don't ever give up on love its a most beautiful gift frm God. I just love your poem my fried

Greatings
Russell Reinhardt

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