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Significant Crimes
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 03:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Announcements embellished with your name are constant
As I think of your more significant crimes
Do not confuse yourself for I shall include that I have partaken in your wrong
That is, my fallacies became yours; twas a never ending circle of fault
Why is it now that you are caught by the guards for menial wrongdoings
Everyday is a straight-face contest; better yet a make-no-eye-contact duel
For we have forgotten how to smile or even compassionately greet one another
Has my absence created a void which you must fill with immoral actions
Or is it that your absence has created non-stop concern and hypochondria in my vast mind
If only the answers to these questions were as clear as your recent charges and consequences
Today I observed a fraction of your everyday actions and shall do the same tomorrow
The difference in tomorrow is that I will have shared my point with many readers to analyze
And perhaps you will take a glance of my poetic response to our once-love
Then again does not love never end even when the experience is over?
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Re: Significant Crimes
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by StacyLynnG on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 07:36:35 PM AEST
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| Diedra, wonderful poem, best I have read in quite a while. |
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Re: Significant Crimes
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2011 @ 07:57:37 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poetry, well constructed and brilliantly written. |
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Re: Significant Crimes
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 06:09:41 AM AEST
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'Significant Crimes' is a model of soul-searching nostalgic poetry. It mixes all the emotions of love in one statement. I think it's magnificemt, although I can't also help feeling pain for your suffering. All I can definitely say is that such passionate issues ebb with the years: but then you've lost your youth -- and that isn't great... but there's no alternative :)
--FlintHunter
Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Tuesday, October 04 2011 @ 15:37:05 AEST
Topic: Nostalgic Poetry
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