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What so...
Contributed by
sanders
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Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 11:50:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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What so if u thought that u were cooler than me
what so if u felt there were others who were better than me
what so if u thought i was always a loser
you still have to accept that you were the one who came up to me
What so if u thought that u were only showing off
what so if u wanted to end it sooner or later
what so if u thought u really didn't deserve me
you still have to accept that you felt it difficult to leave me
What so if u thought that u were far better off without me
what so if u only wanted to make fun of me
what so if u only meant to use me
you still have to accept that you were always looking for me
Today you and i have both gone far
and losing u tears my heart apart
you may still say it is all as u wished
but you and i both know well
that you still long for me
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2011-10-04 11:50:05]
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Re: What so...
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by FlintHunter on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 02:23:28 PM AEST
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'What so...' is a special poem. It speaks of some painful things, but it is still easy to read. I appreciate that; it's so annoying when poems have words in them nobody understands! I'm sorry for your love-problems, and I hope they work out. You never know... At any rate, from out of your pain arose a beautiful poem. Thanks.
--FlintHunter
Contributed by sanders on Tuesday, October 04 2011 @ 11:50:05 AEST
Topic: Lost Love Poetry
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Re: What so...
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:25:59 AM AEST
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| Heartache is one of the most painful withdrawals out there. I wish you luck and peace. Try to distract yourself. It works wonders. |
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Re: What so...
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 12:26:56 PM AEST
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I like this...Emotive and raw. I must admit, the natural word (to me) to wrap up that final line would've been:
that you still long for this
As opposed to:
that you still long for me
Not to step on poetic toes, I apologize, but the poem sorta flowed towards that ending.
I really like the acceptance lines that close each stanza. People can be such jerks when a relationship sours.
Keep your head up!
~Scorp |
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