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i needed you...
Contributed by
pollyamik
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 10:27:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The air is thick, slowly choking me to death.
The breeze is cold...without you next to me.
It's to dark to close my eyes.
Cause even in my dreams I know the shadows lye.
You were my light,
The air I breathed.
And you left me.
Death took your place and it's all that I can see.
Without you by my side I can feel my soul slowly slipping away from me...
~polly~
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2011-10-04 10:27:54]
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Re: i needed you...
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 10:46:36 AM AEST
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I remember all too well feeling like this. But nobody is more there for you than yourself. Nobody is alone, nobody can give up- find that fire inside you and fight it out x
G'luck my friend x -all my love. x |
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Re: i needed you...
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by sanders on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 12:12:34 PM AEST
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| i guess all of us have to go through situations like this nevertheless we should always try to keep hope..good poem.. & good luck |
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