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-Sands of Time-
Contributed by
gem48
on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I reach out infront of me
Grasping
Trying to hold on
The rope slips through my hands
The only thing keeping me alive
The safety rope
The line between life and death.
My hands are raw
Show scars if my attempts
All for nothing.
I continue to fall,
The rope burn extreme.
falling at a rate of knotts.
Once i was grounded,
Feet firmly on sanity
Now they sink.
Deeper and deeper into the quick sand.
I cant escape.
I grasp at the grains of sand,
The sands of time,
My life,
Slipping through my fingers.
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gem48
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2003-04-30 09:35:00]
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Re: -Sands of Time-
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:32:34 AM AEST
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| Hmm.. reminds me of my poem 'Sands' which is also about the sands of time. Wow! this poem sure sounds cool! |
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Re: -Sands of Time-
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:13:39 PM AEST
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intense write, thanks for sharing.
Michelle |
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Re: -Sands of Time-
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:34:01 AM AEST
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| your right its been done alot but this was a great peice! So very true! Christina |
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