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restless pen
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 12:25:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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a man
had not
form
Iris
dropped
three petats
on his
dys-
function
mirrors crack
lines pop
weave snipped
fear
pushes
ink.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-10-03 12:25:33] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: restless pen
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 09:35:36 AM AEST (User
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Ming, your work never fails to grab my attention but this piece is gripping and this now has to be a favorite for me...this piece has so much intrigue that after reading it a few more times it became much more...great piece of writing and an awesome read
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