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Dragonslayer
Contributed by
barries
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Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 06:25:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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a courageous dragonslayer
he doesn't work for the mayor
he is Zorda the ferocious
he leaves a dragon motionless
another keg of ale
Zorda , he looks a bit pale
the thing today i've seen
no , it could not have been
i've seen it with my own two eyes
you all , all your lies
my dragon does not need to die
we're all living a lie
a lie that they might hurt
truth is , they do hurt
we are part of a race
man and beast run this race
together we fight a neverending battle
battle against each other's cause
we're all too stubborn to see
the truth of living in harmony
Copyright ©
barries
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2011-10-03 06:25:16]
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Re: Dragonslayer
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by Barries on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 10:19:06 PM AEST
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| can someone PLEASE comment on this piece |
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Re: Dragonslayer
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 16th October 2011 @ 03:02:18 AM AEST
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| hi, i like this poem, it portrays the classic archetypes, good verse's evil, oppression verse's freedom, you are symbolic of the hero on a hero's journey, who needs to vent his frustrations, shout loud to grab the attention of those who are subdued still in their ignorance and bliss.Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem Beautiful Sound, , I appreciate all the input i get as i am fairly new to this forum also. |
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