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stupid lucid

Contributed by alicewhite on Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 03:26:39 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



How can i be sure what im looking for,
am i dreaming or am i awake,
for my souls sake.

I must be blinded by this reality,
cant find what i need,
when all i see is greed and take take take.

one one one once upon a time
I dreamt i was alive,
gone gone gone,
where are the angels?
one one one once i wake you up,
ive had enough,
of stupid lucid dreaming,dreaming, dreaming.

how can life be lived,
when there is no heart beating,
living life to me means much more than just breathing,
a hearts not a heart when its got no feeling.

life is gone when we get it wrong,
without life there is no meaning,
meaning,
meaning.

one one one once upon a time
i dreamt i was alive,
gone gone gone,
where are the angels?
one one one
once i wake you up
ive had enough ,
of all this stupid lucid dreaming
dreaming,
dreaming.

If beauty is skindeep am i ugly inside?
if i value my pride,?
skindeep,
inside,
where my soul hides,
wake up break out let it shine.

this shell of me,
the sandmans confines,
open my heart, open my eyes,
IM free of me and i wont die,
and i wont cry for the shell of me,
I'll shine my light
and i will break free.

Stupid lucid dreamers,
cant judge me,
now i see

Stupid lucid dreamers
their not me,
now i see
Im set free





Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2011-10-01 15:26:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: stupid lucid (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:35:51 PM AEST
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This is brilliant. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.

*S* Cynthia


Re: stupid lucid (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Saturday, 3rd March 2012 @ 06:17:51 PM AEST
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I like this a lot.. Although i like writing poetry, I too will write a song from time to time.. But yes, this was good.. I'd like to hear the song it is... Plus, I really like your titles.. They're cool and intresting.. I will be reading more of your work.. Take care..


Re: stupid lucid (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Saturday, 17th March 2012 @ 07:19:53 PM AEST
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i love your work. i just keep reading more and more of it. i am gonna have to go check out your daughter sing on sound hound. thank you for sharing your talent with us here at ypdc.


Re: stupid lucid (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 7th March 2019 @ 02:15:31 AM AEST
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So this is how it all started???
This was wonderfully penned.
This was your style.... Bravissimo...Bravissimo!




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