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A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine)
Contributed by
duff
on
Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:29:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Jaded by their own life decision fragility
Indolent vampires ravage our daily banks
With broken down smiles cowardly of play
They escape future coveting private eyes
Stock market suckers minus the spine are
Second place servants afraid of what's rare
Copyright ©
duff
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2011-10-01 07:29:53]
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Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine)
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:54:42 AM AEST
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I must say -- I hear you -- loud and clear.
So much truth here,
yet many will never know....
I can't elaborate -- any better than you have here.
Well writen -- as you know:
this is not just coincidence....
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine)
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:58:17 AM AEST
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| Great write! I love the unorthodox style of writing as well...got a very off-beat flow to it.....deep words.....truth revealed..... |
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Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine)
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 12:00:27 AM AEST
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| I like how abstract your poems are. It is very artistic. |
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Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine)
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by ming on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 12:09:02 PM AEST
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OH DUFF! You should write this on a sign and go march with the 99%! LOVE LOVE LOVE!
ming |
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Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine)
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by Katie101 on
Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 08:07:28 PM AEST
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| If I were to decribe this in one word it would be brilliant. You have some emense talent! Keep writing!:) |
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