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A Letter From Heaven.
Contributed by
alwong
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Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 08:44:55 AM in AEST
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Your letter seems dropped from heaven,
Likes a piece of stone falling,
To a peaceful lake of water,
Disturbing my peace suddenly.
Why it comes so late after you disappeared,
For over forty years.
You're thought moved to heaven long time ago;
Echoing in my ears you're a floating plant;
You might float down to a river of no return;
In these forty years how sad I was for
lost a good friend.
Now you come back disturbing my peace again;
Your letter might be a little wild fire begin;
I'm willing it never comes to my eyes;
It's an envelope of bitter poison to my throat.
How could you stand so long not contact me?
Your letter comes with fire and poisen,
which I don't quite want its arrival.
Copyright ©
alwong
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2011-09-28 08:44:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Letter From Heaven.
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 10:05:00 AM AEST (User
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Dear respected alwong,
Your anxiety is understood
You love that friend deeply
As a result of no response
You are getting annoyed
Your agitation is justified
Still your poem is titled as
"A Letter from Heaven"
This proves your true love
Just love your dear friend
Better late than never.
With best wishes, Thanking you, yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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