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toward sky
Contributed by
aulakh
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2011 @ 06:02:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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toward sky
my eyes always see
toward sky
always i have
in my mind
await for clouds
when black and thunder clouds
acquire entire sky
it is a vamp scene
when black coverlet
covered sun light
the same trend repeated
in my mind
when a dust storm
from desert of mind
blow with velocity
a puff rise from
my willing
and covers whole sky
of mind
my eyes starting on raining
a lukewarm water begin to fall
this water wash your obscure portrait
and i can see you properly
face to face
for some minutes
in this holy time
i exchange some dialect with you
through your portrait
when i want to meet with you
i rise my head toward sky
Copyright ©
aulakh
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2011-09-27 18:02:11]
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Re: toward sky
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Tuesday, 27th September 2011 @ 06:07:14 PM AEST
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How sentimental and touching! I enjoyed your beautiful write and can truly relate. Take care and God bless,
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Re: toward sky
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by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 06:23:29 AM AEST
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'toward sky' is a beautiful and sensitive poem. The imagery sparkles. The song of your heart is heard in these words. Good writing, my friend!
-- FlintHunter
Contributed by aulakh on Tuesday, September 27 2011 @ 18:02:11 AEST
Topic: Love Remembered
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