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Black Heart
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Sunday, 25th September 2011 @ 04:54:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I give my heart to broken dreams,
and wake to my tormented screams,
but life will never break me down,
or take from me this cursed crown,
for I am king among the damned,
and in this torment I have found,
a beauty that not many see,
a vile beauty... that I set free,
and till my deformed soul departs,
I will hold your broken heart.
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deusdeira
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2011-09-25 04:54:35]
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Re: Black Heart
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by duff on
Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 11:08:52 AM AEST
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Wonderfully wicked to the point that you drive home in beautiful detail how dark a place you speak of. Actions put us in our place where ever that maybe and i really enjoyed this piece.
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Re: Black Heart
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 06:15:00 PM AEST
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Ooh, deep and chilling.
I like how you say that though. I personally find myself feeling a strange bit of beauty in being broken-hearted. It's odd though because I can't quite say for certain why, but I feel it's something best held on to. It almost serves to solidify the peaceful and happy memories you remember. It's a painful purging process, but a lovely one at that.
Glad to be back and get to read some of your stuff! :) |
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