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Her Economy
Contributed by
duff
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Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 11:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The band playing is dressed in black
Victoria’s flush by the blush of hands
Above the tracks she’s got a tattoo
It’s of a tear running down her stone
Coffee riding on future impressions
A plan B escort pursuing new frames
Just a daddy’s girl without approval
Blowing kisses for tomorrow's lights
Copyright ©
duff
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2011-09-23 23:14:56]
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Re: Her Economy
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 07:47:11 AM AEST
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'Her Economy' is a strong and very interesting poem; I don't find it to be really DARK -- (category) -- but that is your feeling -- and thus it is right. The words are special and they have a special ring to them -- also the meter helps to make this verse a thing of wonderful originality. A unique piece. And I must say that I love a short poem that gets right to the point: rarely have patience for long poems. This one is a rare stone. Fine verse. Thanks.
--FlintHunter
Contributed by duff on Friday, September 23 2011 @ 23:14:56 AEST
Topic: Dark Poetry
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Re: Her Economy
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by ming on
Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 08:20:20 PM AEST
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I want to wear dark clothes and pile wet stones while drinking coffee and losing daddy. Oh wait, I did, with you Duff as this precise poem took me there! It may not be where you were, but it took me...
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