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Hope
Contributed by
jecox
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Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 07:09:43 PM in AEST
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And the tears fall like rain
But the sun will still remain
And if the hurt comes again
Love will mend the pain
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Re: Hope
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 08:33:55 PM AEST
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Every line let alone word is true and inspiring! Out of all the tattoos in the world this is would be one of the most productive. Keep writing and God bless,
Deidra |
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Re: Hope
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 04:38:45 PM AEST
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| I am a firm believer in getting a tattoo that actually means something. I think that would be an excellent reminder. |
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Re: Hope
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by alwong on
Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 08:00:07 AM AEST
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Yeah, the world doesn't hear,
although you cried with tear.
Love does mend pain,
but it also increases pain.
It's good get tattoo on,remind you for a pain.
Would you erase it when the pain is replaced with a new love?
I love your poem with enough rhymes, |
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Re: Hope
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by jecox on
Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 12:24:46 AM AEST
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| thank you all but alwong, i don't quite understand you. |
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