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Starting to fade into dark
Contributed by
Cyndal
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Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 06:18:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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What a lovely feeling of numbing bliss
My eyes are blurry with tears; I can barely see past the pain.
My heart crushes under this and life has become an empty shell.
My body is shutting down and my final rest awaits.
My once happy heart is now pumping so slowly, fighting to keep my body alive.
I keep waiting for the final beat, the final sigh, before I am set free from this pain.
And yet the voice that could safe me will not speak.
So drifting into darkness I go with tears on my cheeks hoping that the world will be brighter once Im gone.
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Cyndal
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2011-09-23 06:18:16]
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Re: Starting to fade into dark
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 08:23:10 PM AEST
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'Starting to fade into dark' is clearly written and easy-to-read poem about a devasrting depression. It is -- in and of itself -- a hint. I think it points to redemption -- perhaps redemption you have already found. I hope so. Once again I see a beautiful expression that has -- strangely -- arisen from a dark world. Ah. The light!
--Flinthunter
Contributed by Cyndal on Friday, September 23 2011 @ 06:18:16 AEST
Topic: Emotional Poetry
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Re: Starting to fade into dark
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 04:41:25 PM AEST
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| When depression hits a certain level, it truly does feel like you are dying on the inside, and that you will never be whole again. This poem captures that in all its simplicity. |
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