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Dedicated to My Brother
Contributed by
vr2776
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Thursday, 22nd September 2011 @ 10:54:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Our lives are rushed
and times fly by...
but the memories are
forever etched in my mind...
I sit here and remember the
times we used to share
just like it was yesterday...
the laughter we shared so often
and all the things we would say...
My Little brother to me
you will always be...
Even if 6 Feet you stand
and only your chest I reach...
Special to me in every way
my little brother is...
I would go back to when we
were close, If I had one wish...
You made me mad and
we would argue often...
But there are those times when
only you would understand me
and my heart would soften...
My secrets you held like a journal
and never gave them up...
Though most of the time
you were a pain in my butt...
Now grown up we are and
with families of our own...
with miles of land between us
We feel the Love is not shown...
But remember little brother
there is a spot you will
always hold in my heart...
and no matter the distance
or time that passes, No one
but you will have that part...
Copyright ©
vr2776
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2011-09-22 10:54:18]
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Re: Dedicated to My Brother
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd September 2011 @ 05:19:19 PM AEST
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So sweet and beautiful.
good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Dedicated to My Brother
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by aliopterix on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 04:00:47 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written. Reminds me of myself and my sister. Thank you,
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Re: Dedicated to My Brother
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by aliopterix on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 04:01:20 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written. Reminds me of myself and my sister. Thank you,
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Re: Dedicated to My Brother
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 06:46:39 AM AEST
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'Dedicated to My Brother' is a bittersweet poem that touches me in the heart; I understand your feelings since i have them too. Your lines are easy reading -- the words don't ever stop you. Such are poems that pour from the heart. This one is a fine set of verses that mean a lot and say something important -- and that -- very -- clearly. Clearly an honest message to a dear brother. Congratulations!
--Flinthunter
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Re: Dedicated to My Brother
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 04:44:01 PM AEST
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| so many relationships are damaged by distance and other obligations. I hope I live to see the day when distance doesn't matter due to technology. Unfortunately there is no way to fix the time constraints on humanity. There are only 24 hours in a day after all. |
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