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Snow
Contributed by
bithajane
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Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 03:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Its so cold,
the wind is blowing so bold.
Its winter time now,
the sun has took its bow.
Goodbye bumble bee,
as the snow hits me.
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bithajane
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2011-09-19 15:50:12]
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Re: Snow
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 04:02:03 PM AEST
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Well I like it just fine.
Great writing.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Snow
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 04:20:07 PM AEST
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embrace the cold,
let warmth depart,
and be swallowed by
deep winters heart.
:P |
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Re: Snow
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by aulakh on
Tuesday, 20th September 2011 @ 06:47:55 PM AEST
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| arriving winter and snow mind blowing way to tell. thanks for this nice poem |
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Re: Snow
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by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 21st September 2011 @ 01:53:39 PM AEST
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I think this is a terrific poem. Please don't apologize for your poems -- before a person reads them. I won't say all the reasons, but I was a teacher, and I know. Your poem is sweet and easy-to-read, and it gives one an inner smile, too. Thank you.
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