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dusty shelf
Contributed by
ming
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Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 08:38:14 AM in AEST
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alibies and lullabies
rearranging molecules
what was not known
stop knowing now
reality's long
shelf-life
midnight derbis
find the hiss
and drain
'forget/forgive' blurred
by WHAT?
think like smoke
turn the clatter-song
down the shadows
have never been
so empty.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-09-19 08:38:14]
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Re: dusty shelf
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 11:58:30 AM AEST
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'dusty shelf' is another ming gem. I am not equipped to understand it -- all -- but parts of it
make sense to my linear brain. I am in love with 'reality's long / shelf-life' and 'and drain / 'forget/forgive' blurred / by WHAT?' -- the latter particularly -- since to forget and to forgive have always seemed mysterious -- and unfathomable -- things in Here... practice them rarely. As always, a priceless show. A Ming vase that holds us captive -- not an unusual thing -- with ming.
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Re: dusty shelf
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 01:56:43 PM AEST
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Good work, friend even tho it has sadness.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: dusty shelf
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 01:56:49 PM AEST
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Good work, friend even tho it has sadness.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: dusty shelf
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by duff on
Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 11:53:22 AM AEST
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Another intricate and complex piece that opens the flood gates for interpretation...so much possibility in each of your lines... there is always so much mystery in your words...great job my friend
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