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My Mother
Contributed by
vikki
on
Sunday, 18th September 2011 @ 10:35:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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My mom
The vacuum was filled to optimum
the moment I saw you….
My heart was lonely n searched for you
every where …. High n low
You are so tiny yet,
your place, is of highest order in my life.
The moment you snuggled in my arms
i knew its you ………
You had brought me into this world
But then, you had left me in the lurch,
My heart was crushed but..
I was dead sure you would be back
to pamper n shower me with all your love …
And now that you are back
My heart is full of joy….
The vacuum in my heart is
filled with your divine n pure presence.
Copyright ©
vikki
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2011-09-18 22:35:53]
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Re: My Mother
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 06:54:10 AM AEST
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'My Mother' is a universal poem; there is no one like Mother. Father runs a close second -- if he's lucky, but Mother is the One. Your poem speaks eloquently on this matter -- mater prevails. No matter her actual presence, she is always there for you -- somehow. Very even writing. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.
--FlintHunter
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Re: My Mother
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th September 2011 @ 02:49:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Really great write.
blessings,
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