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its ok not to be ok.
Contributed by
pollyamik
on
Sunday, 18th September 2011 @ 08:40:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can see through it, the hurt, the pain, the suffering you feel inside,
it's there but you don't let it show.. Hun do you think I wouldn't know?
It's out there ,and clear, hell it's screaming I'n my ear,
"help me for all is lost"
I love you but I can't pay the cost, the cost I must pay to be with you the one I must pay to see you through,
but the cost is to high, I couldn't save you to save my life,
but forget that if I die, my last breath I will say goodbye,
if It costs me my life I will keep you safe, all to see a smile on your face.
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pollyamik
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2011-09-18 08:40:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: its ok not to be ok.
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Monday, 26th September 2011 @ 01:55:28 PM AEST (User
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'its ok not to be ok.' is far more than a lovely love poem. It tells the Truth -- and that Truth is very complex -- as is love, sometimes. The ending is great. Thanks.
--FlintHunter
Contributed by pollyamik on Sunday, September 18 2011 @ 08:40:33 AEST
Topic: Emotional Poetry
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