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Beneath
Contributed by
BithaJane
on
Saturday, 17th September 2011 @ 11:19:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What lies beneath,
under my skin,
there is a person.
She is screaming to come out.
That poor girl, to many doubts.
Trying so hard to be loved by everyone.
All she wants is a place to call her own,
but she's just left alone
She'll never be heard,
but one day she will grow wings and fly like a bird.
You'll regret not seeing her best,
this life was just a test.
I bet you didn't hear her cries,
all because of your lies...
Grinding her teeth,
ignoring that girl beneath.
Copyright ©
BithaJane
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2011-09-17 11:19:42]
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Re: Beneath
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 17th September 2011 @ 05:02:36 PM AEST
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Captivatingly remarkable this poem is! It reminds us that we need to give every individual the opportunity to express themselves. You have accomplished such a wonderful task of responding to life in an eloquent manner,
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Re: Beneath
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by FlintHunter on
Sunday, 18th September 2011 @ 07:53:30 AM AEST
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I think Beneath is a very powerful and yet an easy-to-read poem; not that it is without pain -- but it is expressed so freely, as if a river. This is fine example of poetry that touches upon the flimsy masks we all hide behind. Wonderful words!
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