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Spring
Contributed by
ldinlove
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Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 08:59:59 PM in AEST
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ChildrensPoetry
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I know spring is coming because I see beautiful blossoms blooming from silky seed.
I know spring is coming because I hear bluejays chirping the tune of Red River Valley.
I know spring is coming because I smell sweet blossoms growing a vine rainbow.
I know spring is coming because I feel warm sunshine covering the side of me.
I know spring is coming because I can almost taste a spring wind blowing Heaven to a brighter place.
Dale
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ldinlove
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2011-09-15 20:59:59]
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Re: Spring
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 09:03:22 PM AEST
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Wow this is spectacular writing.
I know u r very proud of him and he should be proud of him self.
Tell him to keep writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Spring
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by spud on
Friday, 16th September 2011 @ 07:06:55 AM AEST
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Hi,
He perceives and observes beyond his age.
Nurture his talent - there is much potential
here.
Tommy
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Re: Spring
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by FlintHunter on
Sunday, 18th September 2011 @ 08:32:37 AM AEST
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Spring is more than delightful. Dale, you are a beautiful child. Please keep writing. This is a great poem, but as you keep writing, your poems will keep getting better and better and better! G-d gave you the ability to express yourself beautifully in words -- a lucky one, you: great poem! Thanks!
--FlintHunter
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Re: Spring
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by ammar on
Tuesday, 20th September 2011 @ 10:07:35 AM AEST
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A great poet in the making! It was certainly worth reading again. A beautiful write.
Peace
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Re: Spring
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 20th September 2011 @ 11:05:11 PM AEST
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the kid's a Romantic poet reborn - pastoral indeed.
Spike |
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