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Murderous lust
Contributed by
razorbladerose
on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Mist blurs the hills as the limpid sky fades to gray
The moonlight casts a shadow of swirls disappearing into dusk
It was there she saw him
A tall, wide black figure moving towards her
She knew his face
His name...a mystery
She once cried him a river
Slowly, he drowned in the midst of her deep sadness
His return for condemnation
A second chance to lurk out of the crisp dawn below
Seemingly so familiar to her
She lets him reach out to her
He touches her with ice- cold fingertips
Her skin, as soft as rainwater
As he kisses her, he bites till she bleeds
She violently falls to the ground
He glares into the windows of her soul
He then sheds a tear down on her
He cries a river on her
Slowly, she drowns in the midst of his deep anger
He carefully takes her windless body in his arms
Walks away over the misty hills under a once limpid sky
He takes her to a world of sadness and anger
He takes her to a place known as...earth
Copyright © Jeannie T. 2003
Copyright ©
razorbladerose
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2003-04-30 00:05:00]
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Re: Murderous lust
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 06:01:20 AM AEST
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dark but beautifully well written..almost mesmerizing.
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Re: Murderous lust
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by Chenobi on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:21:15 AM AEST
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| It's beautiful. I was holding my breath while reading. |
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Re: Murderous lust
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:39:44 AM AEST
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OMG!! What an incredible poem. Absolutely mesmorizing!! You should be really proud of this!
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Re: Murderous lust
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:27:37 PM AEST
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WOW!! Powerful write. A bit dark but I liked it just the same. I have to agree too a point. Our world is turning into a crazy place at times.
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Re: Murderous lust
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by Mosier on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 05:50:24 PM AEST
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| Quite nice. I like the ideas and imagry. |
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