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dismantled
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 10:39:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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through
to a wonderous
a
lone
ness
embracing
all dead illusions
keeping
hardened love left
wor
ship
less
hot and hot
she sighs they sigh
choked
with walls
made of
wind
al
ways.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-09-15 10:39:20]
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Re: dismantled
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by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 11:06:59 AM AEST
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A precious gem, fanatastic:
in the way it's so impeccable.
This flows -- passionately:
as does an acient river --
infininte and wise....
Immaculate.
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: dismantled
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 04:20:51 PM AEST
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I loved this write and the style is fitting for it. Lovely work.
Michelle |
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Re: dismantled
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 08:36:33 PM AEST
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Very creative. Well done.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: dismantled
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by spud on
Friday, 16th September 2011 @ 07:14:27 AM AEST
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Hi Ming,
I confess I don't always understand your
poetry, but that is my failing, not yours.
I do, however, admire the ingenuity and
uniqueness in the structure of your poetry.
Power to your pen!
Tommy
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Re: dismantled
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by oliola on
Friday, 16th September 2011 @ 08:34:12 AM AEST
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| very powerful, i've read it three times in a row already. |
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Re: dismantled
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by elle on
Tuesday, 27th September 2011 @ 02:59:10 PM AEST
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| dearset ming. . . a lovely creation, indeed. . . elle |
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